Blog:
https://guarbabel.wordpress.com/2018/03/08/playtests-feedback/
Comment:
This is a great opportunity to read your blog. I’m sorry to hear about the accident in your group project. That really affects the progress of the project. You described the impact of the accident on your game and how you group tried to fix it.
It’s great that you talked about the importance of playtesting at the beginning of your blog, but if the description of the two playtesting Alpha and Beta can be more detailed, that would be better. As a reader, I would like to read what questions you asked the playtesters in these two playtesting, and what changes you made to the game after you got the answer. If I can read your team’s analysis of the answers you got from the playtesting and the improvement you have made for the game after the playtesting, I think it will give the reader a better understanding of your game.
Anyway, good luck with your game!
Kaijun_Qilin 